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    Forks of the Delware

    This is a 9 shot image of the forks of the Delaware in Easton, Pa.

    Camera EOS SL1 (100D) w/ EF 40mm STM 2nd image w/variable ND Filter

    Image 1:

    1/100 sec @ f/11, ISO 100

    Image 2:

    3.2 sec @ f/18, ISO 100

    Comments Welcomed

    Tom
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    #2
    Re: Forks of the Delware

    Like your US bridges from an architectural PoV ... but I'm not too sure about the processing ... I keep looking ;-)

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      #3
      Re: Forks of the Delware

      The first one does not work so well for me as you start to follow the weir and then the perspective means it gets 'lost'.
      But with the second image the weir leads more clearly to the bridge which is good.
      The processing is tricky, I like the look, but the bridges could maybe be a bit lighter.
      Andy
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      Canon EOS 5D MarkIV, 11-24mm f4, 24-70mm f2.8 II, 24-105mm f4, 70-200mm f2.8 IS II USM, 100-400mm f4.5-5.6 IS II USM, 100mm Macro, 50mm f1.4, Speedlite 600EX-RT, Manfrotto tripod
      http://www.flickr.com/photos/cyberdavis/

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        #4
        Re: Forks of the Delware

        Like the sky in the first one and the water in the second, pity you couldn't swap them about Tom.

        Bill.
        7D, 400D, EF-S 15-85 f3.5/5.6, EF 100 f2.8 USM macro, Sigma 10-20 f4/5.6, Sigma 70-300 f4/5.6 APO, Sigma 50 f1.4, EF 28-90, EF 90-300, Sigma 150-600C, 430 EXll, Yongnuo 568 EX ll, Yongnuo Triggers, Yongnuo YN14-EX Ring Flash

        Flickr: https://www.flickr.com/photos/94610707@N05/

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          #5
          Re: Forks of the Delware

          Thanks MX5, Andy & Bill for stopping by and leaving your critiques.

          Tom

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            #6
            Re: Forks of the Delware

            Second one for me. The slip on the waterfall really leads you into it. Very nicely edited so that it meets the corner.
            Di ~ Trying to take "the" photograph.
            Di's Flickr

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              #7
              Re: Forks of the Delware

              Thanks Di for the kind remarks

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                #8
                Re: Forks of the Delware

                I think the first one would benefit from leveling the bridge (about 0.6 degrees)? The second one does have a lot of fairly empty foreground. I considered cropping the first one until the bridge was half-way, 1/3 or 2/3 down the image, but they didn't seem an improvement.
                I prefer the first.
                Would colour, or alternate B&W treatment, be worth a go? Also colour might help bring up the reflections on the water, which in the second pic are pretty indistinct?
                Moving water is exciting to stitch but can't see any issues at this size.
                Just some ideas/thoughts...
                Last edited by DrJon; 08-05-2014, 11:43.

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                  #9
                  Re: Forks of the Delware

                  Thanks DrJon for the critique and suggestions.

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