street scene

[jpgrf]

taken with a powershot s80

[tesarver]

Re: street scene

Interesting concept but for me the High key processing of this image isn't working for me.

Tom

[Fr1so]

Re: street scene

Over exposed?

[Tigger]

Re: street scene

Interesting concept but for me the High key processing of this image isn't working for me.

Tom

agree - sorry

[lunarbo]

Re: street scene

I'm all for trying something new but in this case I don't think it works. Sorry

[digiman]

Re: street scene

It's great to experiment, I should do more myself! In this case though, I would have to agree with the above. A bit too much detail lost I feel.

Keep up the experimentation though

Cheers,
Garry

[jpgrf]

Re: street scene

thanks for the comments.

it was intentionally over-exposed to resemble one of those impressionist type paintings, but i think it needs a bit more white in the picture.

[digiman]

Re: street scene

I can see where you're going with this, but I wonder if you tried to include too much in the image? Losing the bikes to the bottom, and maybe focusing more on the turreted part of the building would look great. Just my opinion, and I am no expert

Cheers,

Garry

[jpgrf]

Re: street scene

digiman: thanks for the crop ideas.
i think i'll try it without the bikes and take out everything to the left of the green bag.

[jpgrf]

Re: street scene

redone with a bit off the top as well.

[ST-EOS]

Re: street scene

The edit is better

[digiman]

Re: street scene

Definitely better, more of a story, with the focus on the bustling street. It's growing on me
Cheers,
Garry

[jpgrf]

Re: street scene

thanks chaps.

[AlexR!]

Re: street scene

Agree that the crop is definitely an improvement, and it is an interesting effect. Worth trying and persevering with.

[Nathaniel]

Re: street scene

Good concept but unfortunately not my cup of tea!