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    Tranquility-

    I left some shadows in this shot as I think it ads to it

    Tranquility by Ian Theobald, on Flickr
    :- Ian

    5D Mk III, 24-105 / 70-200 f2.8 L / 100-400 Mk II / 100 macro / 16-35 L / 11-24 L / 1.4 & 2x converters and a bad back carrying it all ;o)

    :- https://www.flickr.com/photos/fotosespana/

    #2
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    I like this Ian, better with the shadows.
    Patrick

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      #3
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      I like this Ian, but if you could drop the highlights on the distant building (through the central arch) I think it would make it even better.
      Russell
      Canon 7D MkII, 550D EF 24-105mm f/4.0L IS USM, EF 70-200mm f/4.0L IS USM, EF 100mm f/2.8L IS USM Macro, 300mm f/4L IS USM, Extender EF 1.4x III, Speedlite 600 EX-RT Speedlite 320EX
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        #4
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        cheers Patrick

        Originally posted by Columbarius View Post
        I like this Ian, but if you could drop the highlights on the distant building (through the central arch) I think it would make it even better.
        Thanks Stan - I did consider that but I wanted to play with the heavy shadows inside and bright light outside...Interested to see what others say
        :- Ian

        5D Mk III, 24-105 / 70-200 f2.8 L / 100-400 Mk II / 100 macro / 16-35 L / 11-24 L / 1.4 & 2x converters and a bad back carrying it all ;o)

        :- https://www.flickr.com/photos/fotosespana/

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          #5
          Re: Tranquility-

          Thanks Stan
          Not quite!
          Russell
          Canon 7D MkII, 550D EF 24-105mm f/4.0L IS USM, EF 70-200mm f/4.0L IS USM, EF 100mm f/2.8L IS USM Macro, 300mm f/4L IS USM, Extender EF 1.4x III, Speedlite 600 EX-RT Speedlite 320EX
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            #6
            Re: Tranquility-

            Originally posted by Columbarius View Post
            Not quite!
            bugger sorry Russell too much to drink at lunch meal
            :- Ian

            5D Mk III, 24-105 / 70-200 f2.8 L / 100-400 Mk II / 100 macro / 16-35 L / 11-24 L / 1.4 & 2x converters and a bad back carrying it all ;o)

            :- https://www.flickr.com/photos/fotosespana/

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              #7
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              Don't fret about it. I only wish some of my images were good enough to be mistaken for Stan's!
              Russell
              Canon 7D MkII, 550D EF 24-105mm f/4.0L IS USM, EF 70-200mm f/4.0L IS USM, EF 100mm f/2.8L IS USM Macro, 300mm f/4L IS USM, Extender EF 1.4x III, Speedlite 600 EX-RT Speedlite 320EX
              http://www.flickr.com/photos/photorussell

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                #8
                Re: Tranquility-

                I love the shadows inside, as I always do with your images, but I'm finding the building beyond slightly soft which is disconcerting and most unlike you. Perhaps reducing the brightness will help but I'm not sure.
                Canon EOS 7D
                EF-S 10-22mm 1:3.5-4.5 USM, EF 24-105mm 1:4 L IS USM, EF 50mm 1:1.8, EF 70-300mm 1:4-5.6 IS USM
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                  #9
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                  A well composed image Ian. Like how you used the light and dark tones to bring the viewer into the image

                  Tom

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                    #10
                    Re: Tranquility-

                    cheers for the feedback guys - seems a mix bag but I liked the way the distant building was, but thanks for giving me something to think about
                    :- Ian

                    5D Mk III, 24-105 / 70-200 f2.8 L / 100-400 Mk II / 100 macro / 16-35 L / 11-24 L / 1.4 & 2x converters and a bad back carrying it all ;o)

                    :- https://www.flickr.com/photos/fotosespana/

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                      #11
                      Re: Tranquility-

                      I'm ok just how it is. The strong like casting that triangular shadow is a great touch
                      Alan.

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                        #12
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                        thanks Alan, its how I imagined the photo whilst taking it
                        :- Ian

                        5D Mk III, 24-105 / 70-200 f2.8 L / 100-400 Mk II / 100 macro / 16-35 L / 11-24 L / 1.4 & 2x converters and a bad back carrying it all ;o)

                        :- https://www.flickr.com/photos/fotosespana/

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                          #13
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                          I'm OK with the dark shadows but find the contrast between them and the bright exterior a bit much so feel reducing the highlights would improve matters. But a nice composition

                          Cheers,
                          John

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                            #14
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                            Good composition Ian.
                            Derek

                            EOS R, RF 24-105mm L f4, EF 16-35mm L f4, EF 70-200mm f4 L IS II USM

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                              #15
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                              seems like some like others not sure, well it least it generated some discussions

                              thanks Derek
                              :- Ian

                              5D Mk III, 24-105 / 70-200 f2.8 L / 100-400 Mk II / 100 macro / 16-35 L / 11-24 L / 1.4 & 2x converters and a bad back carrying it all ;o)

                              :- https://www.flickr.com/photos/fotosespana/

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