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    The Kiss

    Attended a friends wedding and was able to get this image as they kissed

    Version 1
    The Kiss by tesarver, on Flickr
    EOS M5 w/EF-M18-55mm

    or

    Version 2
    The Kiss v2 by tesarver, on Flickr

    Comments Welcomed
    Tom
    Last edited by tesarver; 17-10-2017, 01:14.

    #2
    Re: The Kiss

    Nice shot. I prefer the processing on the 1st, but I really don't like white vignetting
    :- Ian

    5D Mk III, 24-105 / 70-200 f2.8 L / 100-400 Mk II / 100 macro / 16-35 L / 11-24 L / 1.4 & 2x converters and a bad back carrying it all ;o)

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      #3
      Re: The Kiss

      prefer the second
      Stan - LRPS, CPAGB, BPE2*

      http://neptuno-photography.foliopic.com/
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        #4
        Re: The Kiss

        Hi Tom; well done in retaining detail in the white dress; never an easy task. It's #2 for me, but I'd add a dark vignette to disguise the bright sky top right... and maybe try & pull the trellis square... Ignore, of course, as you see fit.
        Cheers;
        Lee
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        5D3, 80D, 40D (IR), G3X
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          #5
          Re: The Kiss

          Vern nice shot Tom...I think I prefer the second.... the metalwork appears to be be off vertical....I know it should be from this angle but a CCW rotation might be a beneficial compromise.
          Brian Vickers LRPS

          brianvickersphotography.com

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            #6
            Re: The Kiss

            First one for me. The processing is sympathetic to the subject whereas the second is too harsh to have any feeling of romance... I'd probably back the white vignette off a bit though.
            Nigel

            You may know me from Another Place....

            The new ElSid Photogallery...

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              #7
              Re: The Kiss

              A lovely shot and caught at just the right moment.

              I prefer the first edit, the second being just a tad too stark for the subject. I rather like the vignette, but for me, I would ease back on it just a little
              Colin

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                #8
                Re: The Kiss

                Thanks Ian, Stan, Lee, Brian, Nigel & Colin for you valuable inputs.

                Tom

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