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    I like this one as the lady waiting on the platform is studying the younger lady leaving the train....the expression and stature seems to be saying something....in that moment

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    Interesting image, however making it a BW image would bring the focus on the story line better IMO, as the colorful train seems to distract from the story.

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    Excellent shot, gets you wondering what the two ladies are thinking about

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    Quote Originally Posted by Stan View Post
    Excellent shot, gets you wondering what the two ladies are thinking about

    Stan
    quizzical checking of dress sense?
    Andrew

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    Thanks Andrew and Stan....here is my mono version on Tom's suggestion

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    Default Re: leaving the train

    Yes, taking the color out of the mix, the focus is on the two women and the story the image is telling. Well done Brian

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    Must admit the mono is stronger for removing the colour - though I suspect there's also been some further processing to focus the attention more.

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    Thanks Tom
    You are correct Nigel...increased clarity, added vignette and boosted the white and black slider.
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