Canary Wharf and DLR Station

[Stan]

[Parsen66]

Re: Canary Wharf and DLR Station

A nice scene Stan but for me too many differing lines and shapes making it over busy

[Tigger]

Re: Canary Wharf and DLR Station

looked at this a few times Stan and I agree with Alan -

[tesarver]

Re: Canary Wharf and DLR Station

Lots to look at in this image Stan but I also would agree with Alan

Tom

[Stan]

Re: Canary Wharf and DLR Station

thanks for looking guys

but for me too many differing lines and shapes

the very reason, along with the colours, why I shot it....oh well back to the drawing board

Stan

[antoeknee]

Re: Canary Wharf and DLR Station

I can see why you took this as some strong shapes and colours. But agree with others the combination of shapes and lines means the eye doesn't quite find a major point of interest. Don't know if there is a shot by cropping on the left though white building at bottom is quite dominant.

[Stan]

Re: Canary Wharf and DLR Station

Cheers ant

Don't know if there is a shot by cropping on the left though white building at bottom is quite dominant.

this is an alternative crop I had already done and the shot I originally meant to post

[ST-EOS]

Re: Canary Wharf and DLR Station

The second version is a little bit better Stan you've captured the scene well but it still is missing something I just don't know what it is I've tried scrolling to lose the bottom three windows. That leaves the air-conditioning ducting in frame which spoils that potential crop. Sorry Stan

[AlexR!]

Re: Canary Wharf and DLR Station

I do like the second, tighter, crop with a straightened bottom. I think there is much to like with the interplay of shapes and colours you were hoping for.

[antoeknee]

Re: Canary Wharf and DLR Station

Second version works much better for me.

[Stan]

Re: Canary Wharf and DLR Station

thanks guys

stan

[El Sid]

Re: Canary Wharf and DLR Station

Second option works better - the shapes seem to hang together rather than fighting each other.

[Stan]

Re: Canary Wharf and DLR Station

thanks nigel

Stan

[anderson.council]

Re: Canary Wharf and DLR Station

Hi Stan, saw this on flickr (on a tablet device where it is easy to zoom in to generate virtual crops) before seeing other comments here and for me you could have a much stronger and better focussed image with a heavy crop to lose the white building (from the bottom) and the grey slab of wall (from the left).

Scott

[Stan]

Re: Canary Wharf and DLR Station

Cheers Scott, I will try that

stan