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    Castle ruins

    Dunnotttar Castle by R MAURINS, on Flickr
    Hanging on in quiet desperation is the English way

    #2
    Re: Castle ruins

    It's a lovely scene and well composed. But it needs more processing to make it zing. Lift the shadows in the foreground, darken the sky, add some clarity and lose the dot in the sky.
    Alan.

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      #3
      Re: Castle ruins

      The dot is a gull Alan
      Hanging on in quiet desperation is the English way

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        #4
        Re: Castle ruins

        Originally posted by tigerburnie View Post
        The dot is a gull Alan
        My apologies
        Alan.

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          #5
          Re: Castle ruins

          Agree it needs further processing - the sky is a bit washed out and foreground is in shadow. Here is a quick 30 second edit using the basic sliders in ACR - very similar to those in lightroom or elements if you are using that

          highlights and whites move to left, shadows to right and a touch of clarity

          Stan

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            #6
            Re: Castle ruins

            I see why you've done it Stan, but I prefer my original, more light and shade, all personal choices.
            Hanging on in quiet desperation is the English way

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              #7
              Re: Castle ruins

              Good composition.

              Bill.
              7D, 400D, EF-S 15-85 f3.5/5.6, EF 100 f2.8 USM macro, Sigma 10-20 f4/5.6, Sigma 70-300 f4/5.6 APO, Sigma 50 f1.4, EF 28-90, EF 90-300, Sigma 150-600C, 430 EXll, Yongnuo 568 EX ll, Yongnuo Triggers, Yongnuo YN14-EX Ring Flash

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                #8
                Re: Castle ruins

                Originally posted by Parsen66 View Post
                It's a lovely scene and well composed. But it needs more processing to make it zing. Lift the shadows in the foreground, darken the sky, add some clarity and lose the dot in the sky.
                agree - that shot / location is where HDR would be at its best getting all the detail from the shadows, then under exposing for the sky - I think Stans edit has done the best he could with a already processed Jpeg but its a location that needs to be returned to
                :- Ian

                5D Mk III, 24-105 / 70-200 f2.8 L / 100-400 Mk II / 100 macro / 16-35 L / 11-24 L / 1.4 & 2x converters and a bad back carrying it all ;o)

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                  #9
                  Re: Castle ruins

                  Originally posted by Parsen66 View Post
                  It's a lovely scene and well composed. But it needs more processing to make it zing. Lift the shadows in the foreground, darken the sky, add some clarity and lose the dot in the sky.
                  Agree.
                  Patrick

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                    #10
                    Re: Castle ruins

                    Thanks for the comments, I have more images to have a play with.
                    Hanging on in quiet desperation is the English way

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                      #11
                      Re: Castle ruins

                      Tiger, agree with what has been said; great composition and the landscape is very dramatic and you have captured this well with the interplay of light and shade, but Stan's edit just adds more detail and interest whilst retaining the overall feel. But obviously a higher quality finish would be had by going back to the raw. Interested in seeing what else you captured on the day.
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                        #12
                        Re: Castle ruins

                        Cheers Alex, having problems with my computer at the moment, my screen image has gone huge and I'm struggling with windows 10 trying to get it back to normal, so no point trying to edit anything whilst the pictures stretched sideways, bloody infuriating Microsoft crap.
                        Got the swine, updates had put the "snap to" function on, fitting images to the screen, happy Easter bunny again, tempted to switch the blasted updates off as I like it like it is, not like some pimply 20 year thinks is bloody cool.
                        Last edited by tigerburnie; 28-03-2016, 15:02.
                        Hanging on in quiet desperation is the English way

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                          #13
                          Re: Castle ruins

                          Castle2 by R MAURINS, on Flickr
                          A lot more moving of sliders on Photoshop, I'm not into the HDR effect myself(sorry Ian lol)
                          Hanging on in quiet desperation is the English way

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                            #14
                            Re: Castle ruins

                            thats a much better image - HDR doesn't have to be about extremes its just another way to pull more from an image
                            :- Ian

                            5D Mk III, 24-105 / 70-200 f2.8 L / 100-400 Mk II / 100 macro / 16-35 L / 11-24 L / 1.4 & 2x converters and a bad back carrying it all ;o)

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                              #15
                              Re: Castle ruins

                              To be honest it was the sky I was trying to get some depth into, the rest came with it as of yet, I've not tried masking stuff.
                              Hanging on in quiet desperation is the English way

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