Penguin - Cotswold Wildlife Park

[LukeGrayson]

Hello all,

Another shot from my holiday earlier this year. Not perfect but I like it. Needs some work though.

As I have said before am happy for constructive feedback and tips to help as we all start somewhere. :)

Also happy late Christmas to everyone.

Penguin by LukeGrayson2401, on Flickr

[Tigger]

Re: Penguin - Cotswold Wildlife Park

nice, I like that ... just out of interest what do you think is wrong with the shot ?

[LukeGrayson]

Re: Penguin - Cotswold Wildlife Park

I would say its a bit dark and maybe a bit taken off the bottom of the image. But I am most likely a million miles off?

Thanks though.

[LukeGrayson]

Re: Penguin - Cotswold Wildlife Park

I also took this one. Which at the time I really liked but now feel its a bit bland.

Penguin Swimming by LukeGrayson2401, on Flickr

[tesarver]

Re: Penguin - Cotswold Wildlife Park



Tom

[Tigger]

Re: Penguin - Cotswold Wildlife Park

I would say its a bit dark and maybe a bit taken off the bottom of the image. But I am most likely a million miles off?

Thanks though.

I wouldn't crop as right now he's walking into the shot, and taking something off the bottom with just make it too central

I also took this one. Which at the time I really liked but now feel its a bit bland.

works for me, maybe lighten a tad

[LukeGrayson]

Re: Penguin - Cotswold Wildlife Park

I will give that a go tonight or over the next few days and re-post to see what you think.

Glad you both like it though.